Comments of chapter undefined of Re: Infinite attempts‎‏‏‎

The premise seems OK but I can’t read anything which handles dialog like: (Person) hello I’d like to read a story, not the scrollback on your discord channel. You actually have to use prose to describe people talking for me to read your story, so instead of (Dude) Do you have anything to say for yourself?! Do something like: Dude was clearly furious as he yelled, “Do you have anything to say for yourself?!” Dunno, just me. I’m disappointed I can’t read this but I have some standards. Won’t make a negative review though. Wish you the best.