Comments of chapter undefined of Isekai : Cheat Internet connection

You should restart your grammar is horrid it's very hard to understand a thing. very bad sign for begining readers

I can't understand who he is talking to. I am confused 🤔.... Author you need to be more specific.

a great stort but.....

Nyampur adukin narasi 1st person sama 3rd person itu NG, bro. bikin puyeng kalo dicampur2! inget, struktur bhs Inggris beda sama indo. 5W1H-lah sebelum translet novel ke Inggris.

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Bacanya agak pusing, kalo bisa sudut pandangnya jangan di gonta-ganti. Gua bisa bantu proofreading kalo minat. Ini discord gua: Iqfauli#3057 ga perlu bayar, gua cuman mau saling bantu penulis dari indo. Semangat bro!

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a great stort but.....

Thanks for the chap

receive these coins for finding an editor. I will be back if it's edited.

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