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Comments of chapter undefined of You made me cry

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You made me cry

min_jasmine

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Black_Wolfie
Black_WolfieLv3Black_Wolfie

Vine por recomendación y definitivamente salgo maravillada, me gustó mucho tu forma de escritura, simple al grano, pero igualmente sentimental y emocionante. Especialmente los últimos cuatro diálogos, tengo que decir que casi lancé un gritito con esas respuestas :P Gracias por la historia, me gustó mucho ^-^

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min_jasmine
min_jasmineAuthormin_jasmine

I do not know who recommended the story to you, but I thank him in my place Your words are so kind and they make me happy even if I don't understand them at first

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MizA
MizALv10MizA

Oh, it's so bitter sweet! Tips: 1- You don't need to loose the poetic veneer and the ethereal mood, but periods in your sentences would do wonders. 2- Your novel will gather the right readers if you change the genre to LGBT+. It'll be lost and even despised in the current genre. 😊

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