Scarlette Overland

I enjoyed the book so far and still enjoying all in the book. I love fantasy romance novel and this made me love it more. You did a great job here author. please keep writing!

This book is awesome. I'm a sucker for a mysterious and brooding main character and a happy-go-lucky side character who can never read the room. Often makes for great comedic moments in an otherwise serious novel.

It's good to see how the writing has improved especially with the updates getting more stable in the past days. Story development has become fast paced in the middle too. Like it.

I am very interested on how the Author desribed about the MC. it was too misterious but tempting to read. I am glad that you pick this genre, female fantasy with such a strong character on herself. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I like the pacing of the story. It is not too fast and just right for me to take in all the scenes inside my head. The author's naming sense is also good. I can't help but think the name Alexa for the person-in-charge at the guild reception really suited her haha. I'm looking forward to this because I like fantasy worlds like this thanks to all those animes I watched. Keep up the good work!

A gripping tale so far, I am thoroughly enjoying it. The characters are very intriguing, and well fleshed out, as well as the world they are in. Hearing about the guild and the rankings etc, makes me want to know more about how the world works. The prose flows nicely, the descriptions are clear and sharp, well communicated. The chapter length is good, and the pacing keeps the reader on the edge of their seat to read more. Keep up the good work, enjoying it so far! Check it out.

Those who have ever played the Tomb Raider games or watched the movies will instantly become attached to the story. To me it's totally like Lara Croft in a fantasy world setting and I always wanted to read it as a story. So thanks author for making my wish come true..hehe... I think the world design is a bit same as all the other fantasy worlds. So I would really love to see if the author introduces something new. And if a little more depth is added to the characters I think with the plot line and writing style of yours it will really become mind-blowing.

I love this novel,I love the mystery and the twists. this is one of the novels I will gladly suggest to anyone who loves a good story. good work author ❤️❤️❤️❤️

I think this is the first time I read a novel that have good spacing between paragraphs, and italic words! Author, whatever magic you did, do tell, lol?! Well, then first I will talk about the writing quality. Which in this case is definitely not an issue. There's little to no grammar mistake. But I did find, one to two sentence that sound kind of weird. I think it's just the way the author worded her/his sentence. As for world background, somehow, I was expecting more information about it within the first to three chapters. But it took awhile, in chapter 11 and onward for the world background to become clearer. As for character design, I think the author did threw the reader, me, in a scramble. Since at the beginning the author did not use the main character name. Instead, the author use the term 'woman' to refer to the main character, and even her face is cover. But I assume, the author did it for reasons such as suspense, mystery, and for later purpose. Onward to story development, the pacing is not fast nor slow, except, for the romance...lol, I think for me it's kind of slow. But I feel like the romance is not a big part of the novel, just sometime to sweeten it. As for the main focus is probably on the main character, Scarlette's past as the author obviously stated: "What is the secret behind her name" and her journey. Lastly, update. I didn't see the author note in comment or synopsis his/her schedule. Which I think will attract more reader if the author does have one. But in overall, great job! Keep up the good work! Fighting!

A wonderful novel. A powerful, indeed enigmatic lead with a secret and abilities bound to keep the readers on their toes. The author has done a great job of creating this fantastic fantasy empire and its amazing characters. Very much interesting.

I dont know what to say but I think the author has a good message and story to tell and the writing style can be improved along the way. If given a chance to unravel all mysteries, this is overall a good read.

Maybe too early to give a review but the beginning seems really interesting. Although the development seems to lag sometimes but it was necessary to develop the relationship of the characters. If this has a stable update, then it could be a successful book.

It is a good and interesting plot with vivid description of the surroundings and even the emotions of the character is well explained. Well Written!!!!😊

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Review After CH8 WQ The writing style itself is commendable with a little polishing of some lapses through proof reading. SU Not sure how often the author works on it, I'll see how the progress goes when I drop another review. SD Based on the tags of the work, I would be expecting more action soon. Romance could be developed along the way. CD Character design exposition was done by talking characters. It could get repetitive when characters continuously spout the title of the MC or other characters to build up. I would want to see those feats in action. WB It follow suits the meta of fantasy world. Hope to see something unique in the next chapters. Keep up the good work!

I can tell a lot of hard work has been put into this story! I haven't read a story like this before on this site, and the concept is new and very creative! My only critique is that the writing quality needs a little improvement. There are times when reading that I got a bit confused. However this is something that can be improved through practice! Keep it up author! Keep practicing and working on your writing technique and I know your story will improve a lot too!

This was a very interesting read to start my morning with! I really enjoy how the MC's personality and relationship with those around her is well established through thoughts and dialogue! I really enjoy how the character's interact with each other that makes it engaging and at times comedic! there's very little grammatical issues that I would notice but didn't ruin my reading experience! This was a fun read and I'm looking forward to reading more!

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5/5 o(≧▽≦)o First of all, I love the synopsis ＼(≧▽≦)／ Second, I like how the author executed each scene (*≧ω≦*) Third, I love the feel of adventure! ☆ ～('▽^人) I hope you'd continue more chapters of this wonderful masterpiece ٩(◕‿◕)۶

The first handful of chapters act as a good hook to the story, adding mystery and intrigue while revealing a lot of key information. For me, the writing was the weakest part. Objectively, it's fine. But my issue comes from two things: I don't personally like present tense; and all speech was formal which I find jarring. Overall a good start, I'd recommend.