sammie_1124
very good writing piece i love all the details and the characters so far. plus the story building is great. cant wait to read more chapters.
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The details and imagination is very well done. It has a very good storyline so far and I can't wait for the second chapter. I also believe that the introduction was a good start to this because it started with something interesting and not boring.