just read synopsis and found out that the mc is called tristan that is my name so yeah thought that was cool well now time to read wish me luck
I feel that this story has a lot of potential. The first chapter was like right out of a Space Marine Chapter Warhammer story. I like how you try to merge the various elements together. In my opinion maybe you should also put the R18 tag due to the gory scenes. Keep up the good work.
It started really well, writing quality is also pretty good. The only thing I didn't like is he cares to much about his sister but we will see how it goes. Good job Author.
Story- I already love stories about betrayal and the rise after that so I might be a bit biased here but a believe this story has the potential to top the charts . Character Design- Unique character from what I read so far even though some of it feels familiar . Story Development- So far it's going smoothly and doesn't feel slow. Can't wait to see how it progress in future. World Background- One Word! Freaking Elves! Elves! what more could I need in the world! Writing Quality- Good grammar and sentence structures. just what I expect from an experienced writer. Update stability-that's too be seen but so far it is consistent.
Very recommended Novel, Must Give a Try you will not be dissapointed. Great world background and solid character. Hope for more chapter. Thank You
This is a well written Anti Hero Story with OP skill. Great character. Been following author avans both novel amd really excited for this one aswell.
This is Lord of the Ring and Warhamer world combine. a very solid world building and great character. Thank you author, hope for faster release.
I recommend this novel for you, you don't need to be much cheerful about this novel, please read, it's nice and cool. happy working author.đȘ
Engaging story plenty with plenty of potential. Would 100% recommend you read it. **********************************************************
The premise is good and the system is cool. Along with the world and Mc's powers. But it suffers from a brain dead Mc. And worst of all this useless sister who is honestly the reason i'm dropping this book.
i will just spam 5 star cuz i believe on the author i hope he makes another masterpiece . ... .. .. .. . .. .. .. . .. ... .. . . .
..The beginning is a bit confusing and chaotic at the same time. But the story gets better the more it progress, well, anyway, this is good.
I love the idea, and it is well written, bit the vanyar arc is frustrating because he doesn't seem like the kind of person who would just give in to a forced marriage. I'm also kinda unhappy that his sister I left out after the first arc. other than that though it's got good grammar (unlike myself) and is pretty well written.
Good story but inconsistent main character. You get the opinion he acts upon his ideals but then he just ignores them for a while. I will probably try to read this again when the story is completed, but for now I'm out.
Interesting premise but that is already it, the plot while unique is very forced and the MC being a "sharp minded" person is often disproven. the explicit chapter didn't really initiate any character development and could have been left out as well, the fight scenes feel very dragged out and are not that interesting to read. The MC is also making questionable choices that made me in the end drop the book
Its a really interesting story, its also pretty original as well which is shocking for webnovel. I look forward to where your book goes author!
A very good original story that is a must read for anyone who likes this genre. I do not really have anything to correct since I really like the story.
Considering this story is tied to his others, it great, and ima need him to drop more chapters soon. love the work you do overall man, and i cant wait to see where you take this story!
Please, give us poor souls more chapters. Story is good with lots of potential. And there are only some grammar mistakes. I want to read more, more and more.
Engaging story plenty with plenty of potential. Would 100% recommend you read it. ********************************************************** This novel will probably become one of my top ten.