Comments of chapter undefined of The Heavens System Subsidiary (I Was Chosen By The Word)

thanks for the chapters keep updating

Its a lot of info drop you should simplify and bring more life to character more intese battles will draw readers A little gore mught help anD dont simp him out to every girl he meets he should be focused on making it to the toP…. good story has great potential with great Op abilities so you should but them To Use by simplifying them he is an overlord in training he should also carry a nutral stance on life and death and understanding the balance…. just my thoughts

Very nice story but it's progressing way too fast slow it down a bit author[img=recommend]

very good story please keep it up!!

good