I started reading this because the reviews said that this story was awesome, but as I started to read it was rather a bit disappointing.
I believe that this story is not actually that bad, referring to plot-wise it’s interesting and quite new, but the pace felt off, it was too fast for me, rushed. The writing felt off sometimes, and a bit too much (like for example in the first chapter when the FL said something about her ocean eyes or something like that).
I want to clarify that I’m not trying to hate on you (author), I felt that this story is good (since even if I felt a bit uncomfortable with the story, the plot was interesting enough as to making me read through), so I wanted to point out some things that may help you improve.
And I‘m sorry if I came off as rude, if you felt offended do tell me!