Comments of chapter undefined of Butterflies and Pins

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I love the basic relatable dynamic of the MC. She's just a normal kid with real-life problems. But I have to hand it to the family dynamic. Despite being from a well-bred family, there's no angst and darkness, instead we have a sweet and caring family, who wouldn't trade her for the world. It's an adorable setting and I would *die* for each one of them.

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I can tell that the first chapter is very good! The description of the MC is detailed but not boring at all. This is definitely an enjoyable first chapter. Thank you for this chapter! 🥰

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This chapter has a mix of modern and also some histories of the family that the MC had. There is also some festivals being mentioned here. I love how the chapter is well-describe ^_^

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Well define description of the MC. I like the word, tomboy 😍😍

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I think the best part of this chapter is how you framed everything and the foreshadowing of the festival!

it's really surprising and a good thing that her family does not pressurize her too much to bend according to their will like how she's a free-spirited lady despite being a part of a long-established family.

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