Comments of chapter undefined of Let's Imagine a Female Knight from Another World
Let's Imagine a Female Knight from Another World
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silent_walkerLv3silent_walker
a strong start indeed. man, I love prologue, writing or reading. the prologue here, definitely set the tone of the story with great writing quality. there's a lot of description over violence, but I like it. a little more description about the location they were fighting should make the picture more clear. and the dialogue tag. please add a dialogue tag on few of the occasions, I had to backtrack few times to understand who's making the call. and do not divide a para for the same character's dialogue tag.
