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Comments of chapter undefined of My Master Is A Tsundere

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My Master Is A Tsundere

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FirmlyGraspIt
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I don't agree entirely with the other guy. I feel that this is okay just that the interactions feel like a running gag? I feel as if they gained a good grasp of each other despite the small amount of time they've actually been together story wise. Not saying its impossible but just seems off. I am not sure but don't take it to heart. I really enjoy being able to see and read a new chapter of this. I am super interested in seeing how this story develops.

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Daoist_Little_Yun
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I'm not changing anything from how I'll depict the story anyway because everything that they(the characters) have been doing have been pushing themselves together to a greater plot. It's not just some lame character interaction that doesn't lead anywhere

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ASTARTE
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By the way if this arc is done please make Veai a bit side character this is supposed to be Master and Disciple can you make The Master speak most of the time because it feels Sabrina is Becoming the side character and Veai becoming the main heroine and the protagonist. This is an Advice Focus on the Main Character interaction and Character Development and leave so a chapter or two for the side character because the side character is getting way too much of a screen time and you can use future chapter to make character development between MC and FMC

2yr
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