Comments of chapter undefined of Magic Shop System
Magic Shop System
Eternal_Demon
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spartacus34Lv15spartacus34
very disappointed, for revenge I think it's really expeditious. His enemy doesn't even know why he died. I had better expectations for this chapter.
Eternal_DemonAuthorEternal_Demon
Hmm, now I think about it, I think I could have done it better. But that the problem in writing in these types of sites, you can edit some things but can't change... because yor readers have already read them, so it won't have that impact on them after I change the scene...
spartacus34:I understand your point. I'm not saying to turn him into a sociopath, but I think his enemy should at least know why he died, after all that was his main goal