Comments of chapter undefined of Dawn- An age of Darkness

Ok... Reading the attack scene with the fighting soundtrack felt good

This chapter was one of the most exhilarating chaps I ever read So dark! Haha 😂

Waw, excellent first chapter. Straight into the action, and yet it felt like nothing was missing. Like the character, the first POV brings up with him into this unbelievable and terrible setting. Bonus point for the realism of the fight. That's how fantasy should be. Even a goblin is a dangerous for for for the unprepared !

If I found myself somewhere like this I will die. . In fear

I feel like the MC so much. I feel like I'm in the book and all I can think about is how to defeat the goblin. Great job and I am planning to read more.

Love the first chapter! This is just outright marvellous.

Wow, this is good. Like dark fantasy

heart-pounding and very dark 👌

Wow. Very good description and illustrating chapter!

The setting is good but I feel bad for mc.

okay i just hide it anymore it's really good , your English was just wonderful no errors what so ever . world building and general description was prefect and elaborate. action from the start very catchy overall i think your goal of number one is very achievable

One of the best chapters I've read so far. But it was a little jarring to read those present tense ones. No italics allowed I guess?

I like where this is going.

This was a goood chapter

thanks

Interesting

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Rather dark.

Not bad.

Nice