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Villain Transmigration: Author Transformation

Aethereal

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Aethereal
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Hello everyone! Author here, it's been months ever since I've started writing this book, and I must say I'm so proud what I have to offer for the spirity and how I've come so far. I'd like to start with multiple third-POV limited in every several chapters therein (about 45-50). So it might not be the usual third POV omniscient or first POV, but I do feel like you should give it a read. The stability of the updates would always be 2 ch/ day; or so at least I've tried to keep up for my readers. I hope you do enjoy it. The story development: I'd say the start would be a gradual build-up before the main event happens. I thought that it wouldn't be right in my heart that there might be some relations with the settings and whatnot, and it would've been a bummer not to read the two different sides of the same coin. The character design differs on every character POV, but its still up to you how you give it a view base on their observations! The world background has similar issue needed to be address with the story development. But then, like the character design... The world building is sufficient enough for readers to grasp the character interactions of the setting in the world got created. Have fun reading everyone! I can't wait to get to know you all! [img=recommend]

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The_Procrastinator
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RABBITICOL
RABBITICOLLv4RABBITICOL

Although there aren't that many chapters so forming a concrete conclusion at this point isn't possible, but I can say without doubt that the author has put in a lot of effort in the making of this story. The characters, as of now, feel alive and relatable, the plot flows fluidly, and the writing is better than a lot of books you find on this site. The book has raised my expectations and I will be following it to see how it goes in the future. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Rena_Gindi
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Breno_Ranyere
Breno_RanyereLv4Breno_Ranyere

Fun story about a novel author having to face some real-life problems like fighting her editor over how her stories should be handled, while also handling some not-so-real-life-like problems such as the villainess of your book coming for revenge on you for killing her off. The pacing can be a tad slow, it takes around 25 chapters for the main premise to really start, but Nathalie is a nice main lead with a likable personality so the road to get there should be an enjoyable one. If you are a fan of stories about fantasy novels coming to life, give this a try.

shrEk2o3
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5/5 because from the beginning of the book, I was already hooked. Nathalie's personality reminds me of a character in a k-drama. I love how she has a strong personality and the author did an amazing job piquing the interest of the readers in each scene for each chapter. The writing quality is excellent, the use of words had me immersed in the novel making me crave for more. The fact that the FL is an author made it more interesting for me. Hehe, if you have yet to give this amazing novel a try, I highly suggest that you do so. ASAP. :))

Xinyi_lara
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Bai_Wu_Yue
Bai_Wu_YueLv11Bai_Wu_Yue

I love it! I'm usually not into female leads but this book has captured my heart even though I've only read quite a few chapters! The content is very interesting and I really love Nathalie. Despite having to tough it out she's not giving up which just shows she's a strong independent woman. And that's what really caught my attention. Structure-wise, the author did a good job! The sequence of events are orderly, and the grammar is topnotch. Keep up the great job Author-san!

Bad_Totodile
Bad_TotodileLv3Bad_Totodile

It's actually pretty i like the style of every bit of information you have there ;) ..................................................................................

CailinMatthews
CailinMatthewsLv12CailinMatthews

Hai hai! Here we have my review for Chapters 1 to 5 because that is my standard for first impressions on a novel. Fair warning to everyone, the progress is slow in these chapters so it might not be your cup of tea. I will do another review for Chapter 6 to 10 in order to compare and give a more accurate opinion about the pacing. One thing I commend about the writer is the world-building and character introductions in these chapters. Nathalie is a lavish woman. She also knows what she wants and she won't compromise if it's really what she believes in--which is definitely something to admire. There's a trail of breadcrumbs for the readers to be immersed with curiosity about what is coming next. Nothing is a coincidence from what I have seen--despite how it's being played out as a normal day (with a little drama) in the life of Nathalie. As a writer, I am curious about what direction she's taking her novel into and how it will play out. Of course, I look forward to the part where she transmigrates into it. Hehe. I appreciate this background on her before the anticipated event so I can get to know her and see how much development there is in store. So kudos to author-sama for that! One criticism I have is the dialogues. It's not a major concern since the story will have fantasy elements but I currently don't find them natural with the modern urban setting in these chapters. Like I said, they are more appropriate for fantasy settings which is where the story is leading to. But I do think having a simple and straightforward type of dialogue in the modern setting is another way to distinguish the two types of worlds in the story.

SilentKidd
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it was really enjoyable to read, keep up the good work, everything is amazing, the plot, the describing of words and the characters as well.

hedgehoghug
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Basically we got how the story would go after volume 1. But if one would contemplate regarding to what actually happened must read all the chapters without a skip. Big Plus! The setting is extremely detailed and full of life.

DragonRiderOfHell
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This novel so far is fantastic... The author has really pulled out a greattg novel so far. I cant wait to see how tje novel devolps further on and how the characters interact with each other

inflict
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Definitely immersive. You could visualize what's happening not only to the characters but also to the surroundings. The author poured big amount of effort in creating the chapters! It's worth a read!

haxeyore
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weillei
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The writing feels kind of forced and the more I kept reading the less sense was being made so much that it became painful to continue reading.

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Commonfighter
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