Comments of chapter undefined of Death, Devotion, Dissonance

well its chapter 20, and i feel like nothing happend so far, most of the content is inner dialogue, and it just wierd, normally if you had a voice in your head, you would think you are crazy, if you were convinced that its a person(which would be an interesting read for me how he figured out he is not just psychotic), first you would ask is who are you, why, when, from where, what you want etc. the way he is interacting with his voice is so alien to me, it feels like its just a tool to give MC an edge he doesnt deserve and a way to give reader exposition... there is so much dialogue, i am not sure why, i would love to know what is happening ať the moment elsewhere, his father thougths, the mages, what is goin on in kingdom itself, i want to know how his surroundings look like. i dont need to be explained how burning and oxigen works ... on the otherhand i think its fine to have a weaker MC, so he has something to strive for, just at this point MC has no ambitions no goals only fear of his father. That is why Arza is so likeable, bit simple character but i can understand him far more. anyway i dont want to sound here negative or whatnot, just posting here some feedback and ofc its only personal opinion. please keep up the good work :).

Well I hope Evin will eventually accept himself and the voice because he seems to be filled with more self loathing and hate then most.