Bad_Totodile
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This is kinda confusing. His thoughts and what is happening is all over the place
Oh noted, Kinda busy creating more chapters. I will edit this on weekends.
Plot seems okay so far but low quality writing….
well I understood nothing. Never one to complain about Grammer but this was terrible.
thx for the chapter kinda get so-so
This feels way way convoluted. Try the K.I.S.S. method. Keep it simple stupid. I'm going to keep going though.
kepted on repeting same thang
seriously ? genocide?
thx for the chapter😻
Thx for the chapter 😻
what is a fire typing instead of fire type..?
