MITCHIEWilliams
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Although there are a couple of grammar mistakes, the suspense is good and makes me want to know what happened between Lu Yaozhu and Emperor Ming.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
đ¤ what's with that imperial decree?
âBrothersâ turned into enemies. Power, greed, and jealousy will do that to some people .
Not bad, just some spacing and some misspelled words? ... By the way, great
At least he's reflecting on himself instead of being blinded by his emotions.
with great power comes great responsibility. With the temptation of power and wealth, one may succumb to such and follow the wrong path.
What is the Imperial Decreee uuuuugh?!!
love the start so far
good read
đ¤HmmâŚ
good start
Ok, let's go!
nice beginning
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