Elyon
nerfing the MC again and having the whole time spent with them again is almost like take 2 of when he first died and met them which imo takes off all the momentum built up so for...shouldn't they have explained their gifts to mc in the first place so he can work towards leveling up to meet the requirements to use them to the max? I'm too invested now to stop reading, so I hope author can keep the momentum and not nerf mc often to take the wind out of the sails for this awesome story
yeah i in love with this book and that why every times author make Huge Trouble and Nerfing mc progres in every Arc... that make me Triggered i'm ready on Rollercoaster ride and ready on Enemy more Worst that Carter BRING IT ON, BUT "please no more Nerfing" and one more maybe u can remove MC Slave Colar to not make his Girlfriends, friends, and their family embarrassing... I know William didn't Care about "using slave collar" and he have thick face but how about People who love and idol him is different...
This story is disappointing at this point. Isnt the normal psychology of straight people is to be heterogeneous? And since the early days, MC knows Ian and Est are boys, he should be more restricted to gradually start development with Ian and Est. Also, the actual nerfing. I want to drop the story for this but I am already invested and want to see the end.
my one and only complaint so far is that I felt like the lolipop wasn't explained well enough initially but I'm pretty sure you're going to fix that in the next several chapters? so far in my opinion you've been doing great. a story should have all of the elements that make you feel different things. good or bad feelings don't make the story good or bad. what makes a story good to me is if you can connect with the characters .and you've done a great job of it. don't let anyone a hate get to you. that's the only benefit of writing full books at once you don't get judged per chapter but by the entirety. keep your head up my author (was gonna say dude but author seemed fun)
Good chapter, but it would have been perfect if Ian and Est didn't have weird ideas that I don't like at all, besides your story is very good.👌 I really liked the romantic development with Wandy and the "dreams" in Asgard, apart from the moment when mc made the kingdom pass before Wandy, he should take his grandfather's example.😌 In addition, many people criticize the slave collar but since he is no longer a slave and has a deep meaning for his master and the mc, I find that it doesn't bother that much.😌👌 I can't wait to read the next chapters and I pray to all the Gods that Ian and Est will become women again forever. 🙏🏼😌