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Naruto:Skill Master

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Lazy_Coffin
Lazy_CoffinLv11Lazy_Coffin

Author you won't mind if I use both chakra increase and trifecta right.

2yr
Bigbro
BigbroAuthorBigbro

😂 I have a novel with Arc of embodiment mc, i did a bit of research and my mc is the weak to strong type i will post it altoghter once the chapters are close to 15

Lazy_Coffin:Arc of embodiment magic is more like creation but you need to have mana or the likes but creation don't need anything like that. In my opinion Arc of embodiment is a downgrade version of creation. You should try and write a fanfic like that. I'm writing a novel but the mc is op from the start and loves to make the world burn.
2yr

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Axes
AxesLv5Axes

Im not gonna lie, you have a ton of mistakes and weird sentences all around but its decent so far. I would recommend getting a proofreader somehow to help narrow the mistakes down.

3yr
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ComTolManBoePyaJhu
ComTolManBoePyaJhuLv6ComTolManBoePyaJhu

chakra increase >>> chakra capacity

3yr
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darkcat
darkcatLv4darkcat

you should get Goku weighted clothes. thanks for the chapter

3yr
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jabc17
jabc17Lv1jabc17

Zenkai boost

3yr
aproc_c
aproc_cLv1aproc_c

give him the skill "turn off the pain" because he behaves like a sissy or "speed up your own time" to speed up your time several times

3yr
GawS
GawSLv5GawS

thanks for the chapter author 👍👍👍👍

3yr
Nipa
NipaLv4Nipa

3yr
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