Comments of chapter undefined of Genius Mage in a Cultivation World

Genius Mage in a Cultivation World

MotivatedSloth

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amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

dude....what u did here is pretty dope. I assume u made this language? amazing, I like it. but man looking at every paragraph comment to understand whats going on just ruins the reading experience. just pulls u out of the moment and to do this every paragraph isnt something most people would bother. And in phones I am not sure if u can even look at the paragraph comment, that isnt possible [ not sure about the app]. and going back and forth to understand whats going on....just no try to just put the meaning next to ur language instead of the paragraph comment ex: "Naola.Parien?" { where are the plains? } -something like this

2yr

Daoist075701Lv2Daoist075701

Bro you're not going to write every conversation in gibberish then expect us to read the authors note for translation right? Just write it normally then say they're speaking in the ancient language or something. Or if you really want to just put the meaning in brackets

2yr

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Beast41582Lv3Beast41582

reading prior comments, I realize author read the complaints of his readers and actually went back and edited their story to reflect it. That alone makes me respect author and want to read further, because from this moment, this story is truly the most interesting and well written story I read in the past 60 novels on this site.

2yr