Comments of chapter undefined of Star Wars: A Single Wish

i don't think the ones are this stupid... especially father

really... pls dont have his family killed

The freakout seems a bit over the top. it didn't flow naturally from what has come before and kinda broke from the characters personality

Thank you kindly for the chapter 😁 When does he get his original memories as I kinda don't want to read an OC character who has no knowledge 😂

Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍

Thank you for the chapter 🙂

There's an error in this but it's minor and can be skipped completely. But I'll mention it. The Daighter said that the Jedi and others and not ready to know of The Ones. This is incorrect since in Star Wars Rebels, episode: "Wolves and the Door" and "World Between Worlds" its revealed that the artwork and information the Empire used to locate the Lothal temple secrets was from the Jedi archives. This proves the Jedi did in facet, know about The Ones for thousands if years since the records are ancient and The Ones are 100,000+ years old simce they lived on Mortis. Also The Fqther said few knew of their existence. Jedi and Sith would definitely know of them. Sidious knew, but maybe Darth Vader told him from his past visit to Mortis leading to the death of The Ones.

I would have liked this if the main character knows small details, and if his memories is still intact. So drop.

thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story