heya ! (does anyone say this nowadays? well, it matters not) Truth be told the start of the book with so many grammar errors is a bit... let's have patience, shall we?
Apart from that the story (until ch 17 at least) seems promising !! It may be that I'm content with little, but it has yuri, the characters seems good and their development is something I look forward too.
The story may seem a bit strange at some points with the mc abilities and whatnot, but overall it's a fast lecture that if let it may end very well done ^^b