R4IN
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To be frank, the grammar in some parts is bad and make it difficult to understand wtf is going on.
I can understand the parts a lil bit.
I agree with first comment. After the everyone dies paragraph I have no idea what’s going on.
It looks like you got confused about how you're going to wipe memories and what age you actually want the MC to be. It's obvious you just wrote what ever came to mind with little concern in editing that part.
My brain
the grammar is a lot better than some of the fic i have find......
niceu
