Reviews of As A Cardinal, I Don't Do Overtime
As A Cardinal, I Don't Do Overtime
Southsky Star
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- Translation Quality
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- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
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I really liked the first 20 chapters, but Story changed completely later and not in a God way. That is probably the reason why the chapters are released so slowly. The first part of the story is a fun variation of the Check-In system genre with a sprinkle of slice of life family time. This part is interesting and well written. But as soon as the real plot of the novel starts everything goes wrong. The MC becomes a stone cold mass murder, which might ve justified, but his relaxed and jovial personality gets completely replaced in the favor of a cardboard cutout of a general of slaughter and iron discipline. The sudden character change and really a change of genre is jarring and frankly not warranted. You can't learn formations in a day. You can't combine multiple strong and independent personalities into a unit in a day and most of all, you can't win people's hearts and their support by slaughter them. Fear is not a God motivator and a hindrance to build trust in yourself and your words. It honestly would have been better if the author just skipped all of the details, he got quite a few wrong as well, and continued with the happy go lucky storyline by making the MC quip about his new work assignment for a little bit, while he did his best to get some kind of ordern into that organization. Also, the formations he uses are completely worthless for this type of combat. There is sadly no human equivalent in history, but if I had to guess I would have probably chosen European small team formation designed for peasants to fight fully armored knights on horseback head on. And even those are really not that great of a comparison, because cultivators are not just simply faster, stronger and near invulnerable. No they also have faster reaction time, better mobility and better senses. If a knight could see well in his thick helmet, then the helmet was badly made and an easy weakness to exploit, while the horses charge was often to fast to react to changes. Cultivators should not have those problems and therefore need different formations.
Login system for a 9-5 job. MC has to work at a church everyday from 9-5 and get login rewards. Like literally every log-in system, he's "low-key" and OP. Then he immediately gets into trouble. He works at a church, and sees the church as something similar to a regular job here, no obligation to do extra work, just 9-5 bs and go home. MC is OP at the start, and has an adopted daughter. I'm glad he's not in the cold palace.
This story is about how even random people in another world still make more then you. In actuality though this Novel features an interesting spin off of the sign in system that is more of a clock-in system at a work place. To me this is more interesting since it actually requires work, unlike many sign-in novels. The novel is pretty fun overal. But there are some translation issues apparent. If the author can keep thinking of new fresh ideas to keep the story interesting, it could be a really good novel.
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Interesting concept, but the pacing is off and the MCβs actions at times are ridiculous. The translation quality is bad in the beginning and only gets worse. In ch. 109, basically everyone is referred to as he/him, the MC is referred to as Monn/Barton/Grace, his daughter is now Elendil. Its difficult to get into the story when you have to constantly reread paragraphs that didnt make sense.
what's the points of giving us only the synopsis? You should have given as one or two chapters instead. Who knows if this synopsis was really accurate? I've seen a lot of fakes already that have a very interesting synopsis but when I read the story, it was crap. I admit that this synopsis was very interesting but what can that prove? Give us a fee chapters instead .
