This one right here is a masterpiece in GOT Fanfic. Good writing quality and good world development it is neither fast nor slow. Characters are also written beautifully. I love the mothers character ba lot. What I'm disappointed in is the slow updates but overall I'm pleased with this novel. Reading this novel is "My time well spent"
I like the direction and the plot progression of the story. Do you have pictures of the people MC is associated with, such as his mother, Ashara, Arthur, Elia, etc.??
Really great story! Now we just wait for the MC to create a new term for Andals, like MudBloods! lol, just kidding. but it would be interesting.
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One of the best GOT fanfic I ever read. Only the motto of the house Dustin already make it worth to read) strong, but not almighty MC, warm family theme, not much drama, clever antagonists like other 2plan personages, interesting adventures, feud building, bloodlusty but mercy MC (I wrote it right), love line prepared, epic and paphos on the table) Only hope that author will find time and power to make us happy to read this marvelous story to end)
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Hey author, don't listen to others. Lovibg the story. You write what you want to write. Excited to read more.Hey author, don't listen to others. Lovibg the story. You write what you want to write. Excited to read more.
I enjoy this. A while back I became so tired of harem stories and this is a good change. π
At first the MC was only talking and dreaming without actually doing anything, and when the chapters where he actually did something, they were all things that he did without explaining how he knew to do them. I mean, he didn't have any background on Earth where he was a genius or learned somewhere (for example how to make a good sewer system, or create bricks and building houses). So when he reincarnated, without access to Google, I can't understand how we knew to do them and create those things... And for me this logical flaw ruined the story.
The lack of planning really shows. Like the expansion is too fast and unrealistic, even with magic. He (a Northern) decided to f-off to essos and become a horse lord. It's just crazy.
This story is epic I love it so much. Please post again donβt leave us hang I want another chapter just one more.
Complete powerwank, unrealistic af. The writing is not that good and simple Words are often misspelled which ruin the immersion for me. Mc is also a gary sue who vastly improves his lands way to fast, GOT is set in a medieval world and building the necessary industries takes a long time. However, i only read the first 10 chapters before I gave up on it. It might have improved but i doubt it. I saw in some other reviews that the author also doesnt like the quality of the first chapters so maybe he could rewrite them if he wants to. π€·ββοΈ
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first few chapters are really bad(γΰ² ηΰ² )γ彑β»ββ»..... rush too many things but after chapter 10 it getting better...... I nearly drop it tho glad I did not
A very rare GOT book having an amazing entertaining quality.....I haven't read Got books or watched the full episode but this was really entertaining for me. ..Thank you and I hope you will update stabily [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm the 80th review! Also, this is hands down the best GOT fanfic I've ever read! I love Brendan and his mother, and can't wait to read more about them! Also, please don't hurt Lady Dustin!
It was good, The begining needs work. But if you stick through it, You can see the quality improve overtime. Stick through the exposition and youβll be greaty awarded.
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Great chapter. Dont listen to others and change plot. This is good. You write what you planned for. Great chapter. Dont listen to others and change plot. This is good. You write what you planned for.
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