2nd review: I really like the story, the plot is satisfaying and exciting. I like that it focuses a bit more on romance, feelings and slice of life. And while the grammar isnt the best, the story doesnt get downgraded by it at all. MC has to face realistic hardships (like emotional ones) instead of your typical fanfic wishfulfillment MC, who get everything theown in his face on super easy mode.....
--> Great Idea and Storyβ€π