ArkAnghel
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It's sooo....... unnatural to the point of being cringe.
10 paragraphs in. The grammar gives a bad impression to readers
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He punched someone's car in the rearview mirror but didn't fight a school bully? And what does the protagonist look like?
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Grandpa and grandma is enough. Why grandpapa and grandmama?? Why author??
he just punch someone's mirror without thinking [img=recommend]
What the old accident?
Why does every mc seems to be a weak, pathetic loserđ
This isn't the best first chapter I've ever seen it's just that the dialogue is way to technical almost all of it are things that a teenager or most people in general would never say in the same situation. It just makes the writing akward to read.
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I'd leave to his own devices, he absolutely Can't be that desperate, he'd need to be insane.(ëâ¸â )
Did his old Clan get annihilated?
Why is there so much info on the bike ride?
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