Thx for the chapter.
But seriously get an editor or somebody to proofread your stuff. There are a lot of beginner vocabulary mistakes or number changes which could be prevented.
for all the games that I played STEEL DRAGONS are part of Elemental Dragon Race (METAL) and they had magic skills too and in this novel they're just useless scrap metal!? that only knows physical attacks!! guh~ what a joke.
I quite like this tbh, its not as terrible as the others say, how to put it, its more tranquil than others in the same genre. if it doesnt get picked i hope i find the link to the raws somewhere
I have decided not to read this until it has been edited. The plot isnât too bad but the grammar and names Have been giving me a stroke while reading, I canât take it anymore. Also itâs not free anymore.