Comments of chapter undefined of Married To My Ex-husband's In-laws

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This is a nice prologue. I really enjoyed the initial plot, and a little cliffhanger in there. So many potentials. Unfortunately though, there are some incorrect grammars, especially the possessive pronoun-ish, like the "his" and "her" I'm not buying it however, since me myself do many grammar mistakes. After this is your very first chapter... please, don't take it seriously. Surely you've improved since this chapter, hence I wanna read more. Keep writing! ^^

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Hi Author! I think your book has a good plot and has great potential it just needs a little polishing,.. are you interested in having it contracted? please don't hesitate to contact me we can work this out. :)

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