Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Their relationship seems so forced

I was fine with either daphne or ivy, but this whole harem situation is just off-putting

Honestly, I didn't like how forced the relationship is. Why would she agree to share her boyfriend with another girl? I would even accept that, if they were born into a time and culture that practiced this kind of relationship, but they're not, so I think it's too far-fetched.

please no harem, just one girl

feels awkward

That relationship is just wrong. I've read a lot of Harem stories, like not when they're in almost everything in Webnovel, some very good and some very forced but this one just doesn't fit. I read it and it feels bad. I like the 2 girls, they are very well written, but the way the situation unfolded was not good, I could have explained the whole situation to them or something. As this is very forced and does not fit. Same, great Fanfic author.

If you guys think about it the sins came of of him that’s why he is not rejecting it

This just killed my interest in the novel, really not a fan of harems in this novels as it nearly never makes sense in the MC's context for it, it's cringe. Feels so forced, awkward and makes little sense for the characters in your novel. I could understand more if you wanted to go the harem route if you had Quinn interact with the two women quite a bit throughout the novel (far more than what happened.) and he ended up loving both but they interacted very little in the novel, with Ivy it sounds like there was a little sexual tension at best and considering how Quinn has been with flings this is just weird.

Oh god, he could just claim that he was under a soul curse. This is really a very stupid direction. I suddenly felt the urge to stop reading...

If people think this feels forced, then all I will say is that all relationships take effort to make it work. Even just a Couple takes a lot of work. A Ménage e Trios even more. Most important is that all sides of any relationship needs to be open, defined and transparent, less one steps over the line. What the three of them did just now was to start off a healthy relationship between the three of them. The start is the most important.

To me Ivy just is so annoying at this point she fully stalks him, sexually assaults him with a kiss and then gets a relationship with him. (Quinn is trashy for kissing Ivy back when he had Daphne)

Supporting you author all the way, people don't seem to realize it feels awkward or 'forced' because you intended it to feel thar way 😉.

author really messed up with his relationship with ivy and daphne, cmon ivy is annoying af

End this harem or at least kill off Ivy. Tbh she sexually assaulted Quinn with that forced kiss and should be arrested.

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so the entire sin vault was to try to justfy this? so quinn is going to be in a romantic relationship with an annoying girl that kissed him when he had a girlfriend and daphne with all her pride just accepted it? man...

this chapter made me cringe the whole time I'm reading it

looking forward to this 😀

dropped, goodbye and have a nice day !