FictionOnlyReader
this.....ive stood up for a lot of iffy decisions in the past.... but this is just completly wrong it conflicts against EVERYTHING we know about quin, from the removal of choice in the time travel, to the complete and utter manipulation of an innocent party (even if that is himself) it just feels wrong and out of place for his character
honestly i think the sin vault in itself aint a bad idea, a way to challenge quin from within and make the entire trop of "defeat your demons" intersting, whilst also giving a plausable explanation to learning soul magic gradually. its the way that a few arcs have been handled and the focus on some elements that really dont fit the story that just make it feel jarring. for example in an earlier arc many people where complaining on the focuse of umbritch and that she shouldn't have been such a main staying point, I agree, by the time that the author got rid of her any fulfilling moment of her getting what she deserved and even the trial itself felt hollow and just trying to expand the chapter number.
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This kinda feels like just a filler in anime, has literally no impact on the main story and does nothing to help the plot. i mean the mc literally forgets it happens in the end making pretty much the meeting pointless. Plus it goes against Mc owns believes in time travel, where he has to ask for it himself and wont do anything until he asks. So him making his past self forget their convo kinda seems out if character. Overall not my favorite arc and seems forced.
For some reason it makes me think that HP's time travel thing is wrong. For eg:- when future-Harry and Hermione save past-Harry from dementors it shouldn't be possible cus the future-Harry had to be saved by a future-future-Harry and that future-future-Harry had to be saved by a future-future-future-Harry and so on., but if it goes on like this for infinity there is no start, I mean if future-future-future-Harry didn't save future-future-Harry he would have died there and couldn't save future-Harry and then future-Harry couldn't save past-Harry. There's gotta be starting somewhere, and you can't just say it goes back till infinity cus then it will be weird cus it gotta start somewhere. If you make a closed-loop pipe then water wouldn't just come out of nowhere inside it, you need to put water inside it so that water can continue to flow inside the closed-loop pipe(This is theoretical so I am not taking real-world variables like friction, gravity etc).
Why is this arc even a thing, it just dumped a massive spoiler on us with no benefit to the mc. The manipulation wasn’t really nescessary since the author could’ve thought of a better way to do things. From now on the whole story will feel like Quinn is being manipulated and ruin the reading experience
you Deserve Absolute hate for the Last few Chapters and you SHOULD put a Notice before the Time travel trash to Skip it so Readers just Skip this and Quin just acts Different now ... its SUCH a disapointment omg i cant believe it you just MindRaped your own MC after 1 Million Words You could have Killed Daphne in front of him and i would feel better than now about it.. Worst Chapter since a LONG time i have read