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Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

the_R_E_A_D_E_R
the_R_E_A_D_E_RLv4the_R_E_A_D_E_R

this.....ive stood up for a lot of iffy decisions in the past.... but this is just completly wrong it conflicts against EVERYTHING we know about quin, from the removal of choice in the time travel, to the complete and utter manipulation of an innocent party (even if that is himself) it just feels wrong and out of place for his character

chance_isaac
chance_isaacLv14chance_isaac

What’s the point of this arc? Just give us the epilogue after instead, this is so wonky for no reason.

The_Damn_Crow
The_Damn_CrowLv4The_Damn_Crow

This kinda feels like just a filler in anime, has literally no impact on the main story and does nothing to help the plot. i mean the mc literally forgets it happens in the end making pretty much the meeting pointless. Plus it goes against Mc owns believes in time travel, where he has to ask for it himself and wont do anything until he asks. So him making his past self forget their convo kinda seems out if character. Overall not my favorite arc and seems forced.

PaQ24k_
PaQ24k_Lv13PaQ24k_

hope quin kills his future self

kratos1994
kratos1994Lv6kratos1994

You really need to work how you solve things author . I feel dirty after reading the last few chapters . I will still read this fanfic till the end ,because I respect the author for the amount of work put in so far .

Sinr_089
Sinr_089Lv4Sinr_089

Did not like this chapter one bit. Made the present quinn look like a proper idiot.But I have faith in the author to make things right in the near future.Really need to teach a lesson to the future Quinn about hubris.

Qursa
QursaLv13Qursa

All that F useless scenes were for giving him THE plot armor? Really?!? You made me hate his Future self!!! This is sooo unnecessary and pointless. To much trolling author-san, to much...

3RR0R_404
3RR0R_404Lv43RR0R_404

this is just weird

Henry_Sawyer_0006
Henry_Sawyer_0006Lv14Henry_Sawyer_0006

Quinn better find out he was manipulated

Zenron
ZenronLv3Zenron

For some reason it makes me think that HP's time travel thing is wrong. For eg:- when future-Harry and Hermione save past-Harry from dementors it shouldn't be possible cus the future-Harry had to be saved by a future-future-Harry and that future-future-Harry had to be saved by a future-future-future-Harry and so on., but if it goes on like this for infinity there is no start, I mean if future-future-future-Harry didn't save future-future-Harry he would have died there and couldn't save future-Harry and then future-Harry couldn't save past-Harry. There's gotta be starting somewhere, and you can't just say it goes back till infinity cus then it will be weird cus it gotta start somewhere. If you make a closed-loop pipe then water wouldn't just come out of nowhere inside it, you need to put water inside it so that water can continue to flow inside the closed-loop pipe(This is theoretical so I am not taking real-world variables like friction, gravity etc).

Redzeth
RedzethLv13Redzeth

Why is this arc even a thing, it just dumped a massive spoiler on us with no benefit to the mc. The manipulation wasn’t really nescessary since the author could’ve thought of a better way to do things. From now on the whole story will feel like Quinn is being manipulated and ruin the reading experience

Faibani
FaibaniLv1Faibani

you Deserve Absolute hate for the Last few Chapters and you SHOULD put a Notice before the Time travel trash to Skip it so Readers just Skip this and Quin just acts Different now ... its SUCH a disapointment omg i cant believe it you just MindRaped your own MC after 1 Million Words You could have Killed Daphne in front of him and i would feel better than now about it.. Worst Chapter since a LONG time i have read

Evertime
EvertimeLv10Evertime

wow some people are salty, if you were paying attention this would have been obvious AGES ago

MTCFBRPERV
MTCFBRPERVLv2MTCFBRPERV

Because I'm afraid that something went wrong and that last 4 chapters ruined everything and Quim and Ivy were erased from time so that everything becomes the canon version... Thanks for the chapter!

CanibalCandy
CanibalCandyLv4CanibalCandy

Satya_sai_007
Satya_sai_007Lv13Satya_sai_007

Time travel in hp is closed loop.. So present mc will be doing same thing in future ... For the GREATER GOOD🤫

PleasantPheasant
PleasantPheasantLv4PleasantPheasant

Ngl, really annoyed you went the memory erasure route. If you wanted him to remove the curse sooner, there are better ways to do it

Thunder_Lord
Thunder_LordLv11Thunder_Lord

So dumb

Azellana
AzellanaLv5Azellana

Dolion and Balbh feels like uncle abate and quinn

Klovnen
KlovnenLv3Klovnen

i didnt liked this at all