Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

You have been prolonging way to much this Umbithc arc and is annoying. Get rid of her already, he has evidence of crimes and she is just messing the whole plot.

I honestly don't understand the turn this arc is taking, unbridge crossed all the lines at first when trying to undo the AID and for those who like to have control of everything like quinn, an invasion like this is unacceptable even if he's collecting evidence to destroy her, he only needed about 10 recordings from different students to destroy her both as an inquisitor and a politician, but by now Quinn must have collected well over 20 recordings and allowed her to intervene in his territory again. For me, the progress of this situation seems unbelievable and to make matters worse the other “problem” of this year, which are the vaults, it's super dragged, putting the two together is difficult to read this volume and that of a person who thinks the fifth film is a of the best in the series. I trust the author's decisions and will continue reading at launch, but it's difficult (by google translator)

If she even try to use a blood quill on him then she is really delusional… hmm maybe that’s why he helped others? So that she would feel overconfident, by not being caught? 🤔

If he doesn't use this to ruin her I'm gonna be really disappointed.

yeah honestly if he doesn't come down on her and Fudge with the full force of the West family within the next 2 chapters I'm probably just going to stop reading until this year's arc ends.

Can we get rid of her already please. If Quin had wanted to he could have made her vanish with a snap of her fingers and no one would have even thought he was the reason.

Thanks for the story, in a couple of months i am come back to see if the story has continue in anyway.

When will she die 😂

Please stop prolonging the pink witch's arc. Just kill her in the most painful/humiliating way possible and be on with it

Author san this arc is being stalled too much. We all know the power of West family along with the incriminating evidence Quinn has on Umbridge, I don't see any reason for him to wait anymore. Unless Quinn wants to curry a lot of favours from Fudge to hide this actions, which also seems a bit useless.

A pink frog will discover that spilling the blood of a West is one of the worst mistakes she could make, as Quinn has a camera in her living room it would be impossible for her to plot this blow against AID without him knowing, please author Fiction make her defeat very humiliating please! Thanks for the chapter!

I like the progression. Nice chapter! Made an account just to say I think your pacing is really good! Seems like a lot of people who read your story are very impatient, but to me, the more we wait, the sweeter victory will be at the end. Can’t wait for the next one!

I'm actually tired at this point

This novel ain't good for those who are not patient. This is not not good for readers who likes to read chapter by chapter and does not have the patience through it. A binge reading of this would be good for those impatient readers.

Feelsweirdman stalling

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter