Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

If ivy is the love interest, i will kill your cat.

The apparent "s3xuall tension" that you are trying to form between Ivy and Quinn makes their interactions feel awkward. I hope you are not trying to make a Ron/Hermione: they bicker with each other so much, that they actually fall in love. That's not a good idea for a long-term relationship.

Great chapter❤ I love your fanfic, beautifully and realistically written. Btw im more and more for Quinn x Ivy, she is a really interesting amd well made character and it would be nice to see how they relationship would slowly change into that of lovers.....

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I just google alan and this came up: "Alan David Baddeley, is a British psychologist. He is known for his research on memory and for developing the three-component model of working memory" it is interesting to add real character[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Thanks for the great chapter! I'm still all for the Daphne ship but hope the he and Ivy don't remain enemies!

thanks for the chapter dropped till find out if Ivy is the romantic interest or not

hope Ivy isn't the romance target especially when there are many good options among the originals

I wonder how the second room changed quinn. Maybe this could actually teach Quinn the expression "curiosity killed the cat". He was almost frozen to death on the first vault and now the second messed up his brain, there comes a time where a person needs to cut his losses and move on.

It should be "brought", not "bought that on himself".

Thanks for the chapter

did he forgot about luna? or is that just skipped

Relationships based on something like this don’t work

more please, i am crazing

Wow ivy is quite an annoying at the moment idk if that’s intended or not hope she gets some character development cause I love the idea of her as a character.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Thanks for the chapter

Thank you kindly for the chapter 😁

Amo esse professor melhor personagem