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Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Strom400
Strom400Lv10Strom400

Yay, I missed a bit Alan :p

Alabado_sea_gonza
Alabado_sea_gonzaLv2Alabado_sea_gonza

Nice chapter. It was time to trust his family a bit

SDIVAD
SDIVADLv6SDIVAD

OUR BELOVED ALAN TO THE RESCUE

tgfofp
tgfofpLv4tgfofp

Meh. The first part of the explanation about the wandless magic thing felt kind of forced to me. All he really had to tell his grandfather was that he found a Hogwarts secret, fell unconscious in a room, and now lost control of his emotions and his magic. Which is the definition of accidental magic. Then ask to see his mind arts teacher or a mind healer. ----> A better execution would have been for him to fix his mind and emotions himself by working on the emotional aspect which you wrote about previously. And after that to tell his Grandfather the truth, once he understood how his emotions affect him and his magic and his decisions affect the people around him. It would have been a cleaner solution with your MC growing stronger as a character. Thanks for the chapter, anyway!

WhiskeredCat
WhiskeredCatLv4WhiskeredCat

Please somebody confirm if I am telling right or wrong. As far as I understand west only feels the emotions of 7 deadly sins.

MrWeirdo
MrWeirdoLv2MrWeirdo

Normal Authors would just leave this day out and not release a chapter, since there were already two consecutive ones. Thanks for the chapter

Tri123
Tri123Lv5Tri123

Ai_ind
Ai_indLv11Ai_ind

I want to know what will Alan D Baddly says about that problem 🤔

Maevis_zero
Maevis_zeroLv3Maevis_zero

Thank you for the chap author-san

Artdt
ArtdtLv5Artdt

Thanks for the chapter

ElG0hary
ElG0haryLv5ElG0hary

hope he get out of this pain with few powerfull and fun abilities

CookieMonster9001
CookieMonster9001Lv4CookieMonster9001

Ok this is definitely an improvement from the previous chapter. I cant wait for the 7 sins awesomeness!!!! P.S. And it better be awesome!!!!!!

AnteChao
AnteChaoLv14AnteChao

Will he actually get rid of the colours or not... Also will he be using his wand or not...

GawS
GawSLv5GawS

thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍

Lorddarkskin
LorddarkskinLv15Lorddarkskin

The whole vault story line is nonsense. Without the power or the knowledge to combat the situation he keeps diving into them head first as if life is a game. Who is this idiotic. He almost died the year before. Are the answers in the vaults that beneficial, because I don’t see any tangible benefits right now.

Great_maid_Oni
Great_maid_OniLv4Great_maid_Oni

you made me cry, thank you

Mr_3twy
Mr_3twyLv2Mr_3twy

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

LazyAdept
LazyAdeptLv7LazyAdept

Thanks for the chapter

Hakkira
HakkiraLv14Hakkira

Thank you kindly for the chapter 😁