Pill_Guy
I do not know if you will see this but please continue your series, and if you had ended it in the chapter ahead then… we’ll That would suck, but if not then I definitely recomend to bank on this story and continue. Your writing is really talanted and creative with ideas coming in nice twist in the story, if you keep practicing your writing I’d say this would be one of my favorite story’s. Yes it’s easier to just mindlessly write a story as it doesn’t take much planing or work. But the way you have set up the plot of this story is perfect. You could eventually touch up of the war and of how Technology is even closer to the living then originally thought. There is sooo much potential just from what you have already written. So even if it seems like a pain or even too much work to seemingly do, I plead with you to keep going. Anyways thanks for the chapter! What happens now I wonder? 👀