Comments of chapter undefined of instant mastery skill in the anime world
instant mastery skill in the anime world
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if you are going to put incest and one in a way as stupid as you are building it right now, with an mc that does not seem to have a personality and moves to the current that you want, at least put the labels, there are people who do not enjoy reading incest and they enter the novel with interest after seeing that it is not on the labels and you go out with this garbage
A half amnesiac loses his memory. Do you have any idea what you want to acomplish with this story? It doesn´t make sense at this point of time. Is it a fairy tail story? Nope just some cameo. A story in earthland? Nope the world is not depicted in it, just some plot elements. Find out what you want this to be. Because at this moment it is not only hard to read with all the spelling mistakes, which I as non native speaker do as well, so not too bad, but the nonexistant story makes it impossible to have a clue, what goes on 80% of the time. I know it sounds like tr*shtalk, but I mean it to be more constructive. Just somewhat in a foul mood.
