Comments of chapter undefined of Hitman's Multiverse Adventures
Hitman's Multiverse Adventures
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Write a novel, even a fanfic, and try to be original when you are not experienced nor professional (gains money from it)... IT NEEDS FILLER SO THE AUTHOR COUD HAVE TIME IN HIS LIFE TO MAKE A STORY(PLOT), alas these fillers have their bright sides, like 'painting' more of the world, showing more of the growth of the characters (personality and powers). Please don't be a baboon and cry to an author when he makes a filler chapter, it only shames your intellect.
Spending a whole bunch of chapters talking about a stick? I am the only one here sincerely do not understand why is it needed at all if the main character has a smartphone as a magic trick, and he can take any convenient form? Just a waste of time. Or here's another ... How is it that he uses the clock and increases the day by 48 hours, and he is only 11? Or is it magically ignored !? Logically, he should have matured twice as fast. If you think about it, there will be more questions for which there is no answer, but honestly, I no longer care about this world and just leaf through. But the chatter stretched out over so many chapters devoted to a completely unimportant and unnecessary aspect? This is beyond good and evil.
