stop repeating the story. we get it from the first person. there is no need in repeating it again from the other person. other then that the story is ok.
Its ok if he is liking her and I am Ok with it but the way he is using to make her fall for him is not the correct method....However he is only satisfying his need....I Think this Guy needs some lesson but I am excited to see his own capabilities to persuade her...