Mayline
i would assume that sending an important letter to the royals is to be kept secret. yet he just casually mentions it to a group of strangers
Love the book
Interesting beginning first chapter, Meryl sure was quick to move on from her husband, and this stan I can already tell where this is going, just hope the sons will be ok.
the chapter has started well. but you have to work on the tense. if you start with one tense then end your chapter with that. It's really distracting.
