Comments of chapter undefined of Our First Love is Everlasting!

It's gud author but I would like to suggest that when you use ( " " ) the words written in quotation begins with capital letter 🤗🤗🤗 otherwise overall it was good

such potential, but with a bad delivery. I'm confused while reading, or the sentences could have been phrased better. like if what was written was, "to the shop I walked and I pebble I tripped over" it would be better phrased as "I walked to the shop, and tripped over a pebble." but it happens when you have translations, so I can't complain much. keep working hard author, although I personally dislike the book, it's clear reading the comments many others do. dont be discouraged, and instead work to improve your writing😁😁😁

Sapphire blue eyes 👀💙

lovely!

the first chapter got me hooked

Loved the first ch! Something tells me, I'll suffer from withdrawal symptoms soon if the Author doesn't hurry up with the chs!

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Good first chapter! Loved it ❤️❤️❤️.

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