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Comments of chapter undefined of Second World

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Second World

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glacer_blade
glacer_bladeLv4glacer_blade

good story,don't make the mc dumb

3yr
5
gonilua
goniluaLv4gonilua

It's a good idea but if you compare between before he got the fairy and after, it feels like you just downgraded his intellect

UnrivaledArcaner:Thanks. I was trying to make the MC a bit more down to earth so people can relate more easily. There will also be another person which will become a part of his group who will be the brain of the group, but that is still a long way to go. But I will try to make the MC much smarter as the story goes.
2yr
6
Robert_Biederman_8182
Robert_Biederman_8182Lv15Robert_Biederman_8182

I do like the humor the author has brought into the story with the back and forth comments between the two. It is a plus, buut as you might have noticed, Jack no longer remembers how to get stronger. It is something that he has been doing this whole time which is grinding. He had to be told by the fairy how to do it. What I want to know is what happened to the elite V.R player, hmm

2yr
5

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efm62_
efm62_Lv3efm62_

the pathetic mc is getting dumber by the minute. <criticism> what is it with these manhwa authors being simp cucks? always elevating the females as superior to men. how sad. .

1mth
stonedinthis_life
stonedinthis_lifeLv3stonedinthis_life

I hope the interactions between the mc and his not so helping fairy guide is kept to the minimum. Talk to a stupid person for too long and you become stupid as well.

11mth
BlazinBean36
BlazinBean36Lv15BlazinBean36

1yr
irl
irlLv7irl

thanks for the chapter! 😁😃

2yr
eloheitzvaot
eloheitzvaotLv13eloheitzvaot

Thanks

2yr
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