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Comments of chapter undefined of I Can Extract Everything

BugsyToots
BugsyTootsLv5BugsyToots

hope this guy hasn't just abandoned the orphanage

_The_One_Above_All
_The_One_Above_AllLv2_The_One_Above_All

👊🏾

Cattyblinder
CattyblinderLv6Cattyblinder

what happen to the children's?

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Prototyply
PrototyplyLv5Prototyply

There's a few grammatical mistakes there and then, for example (not all inclusive): "The deacon flicked his sleeve and leave" it should be "The deacon flicked his sleeve and left" or "if his cultivation is gone wrong" → "if his cultivation goes wrong"

EvilChaos
EvilChaosLv10EvilChaos

Extraction on anything in the world?? Then extract the world itself ‼️😑😒

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Joeboon
JoeboonLv10Joeboon

Hey Mr. Author. One small tip. Just in this first chapter there's a big glaring error: You lack word diversity. In about the first 20 paragraphs you say 'Qin Yi' in like 18 of them. It also happens later in the chapter with a dozen or so paragraphs starting with or containing 'Qin Yi'. Also looking at the start of chapter 2 you do it more. You need to diversify a little bit or it gets tiring to read very quickly.

Osamaru
OsamaruLv10Osamaru

I'm PRETTY sure people are misunderstanding whats happening here. hes not abandoning the Orphanage, but rather leaving it in his Aunt's care for a little while, while he checks out the Sect. He plans on returning shortly.

Chris_Martin_5844
Chris_Martin_5844Lv5Chris_Martin_5844

no-one knows the future. but good deeds will always follow by a good result. how he give his time to taking care those babies and his little brother is worth praise. nice plot Author ♡

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Leo_piki
Leo_pikiLv4Leo_piki

I like the Idea of this type of work and so far pretty good.

DaoisthvF8fi
DaoisthvF8fiLv13DaoisthvF8fi

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Sin_Kinghad
Sin_KinghadLv11Sin_Kinghad

I will re read this novel from chapter 1 and thanks to author for keep writing this novel 😄

Nightshade102
Nightshade102Lv11Nightshade102

bro the novel seems kinda stiff and formal now, the previous one had a casual feel to it. i hope you can fix it

ImShameless
ImShamelessLv3ImShameless

Mc acts kinda silly which is cute.

hazzz1234
hazzz1234Lv3hazzz1234

cheers for explaining the orphanage bit

SightlessShinobi
SightlessShinobiLv11SightlessShinobi

Its kinda like sign in to budhas palm but he just abandoned the children lol, are they supposed to take care of themselves? I was hoping his orphanage would have many talanted kids in it and he just takes care of them

Bored_Monster
Bored_MonsterLv5Bored_Monster

If what he 'extracts' is still there, can it still be called extraction?

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SoySauceSovereign
SoySauceSovereignLv14SoySauceSovereign

Keep up the good work!

Meanesx
MeanesxLv4Meanesx

👍

AlayaShiki
AlayaShikiLv5AlayaShiki

anthony_bediones
anthony_bedionesLv2anthony_bediones

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Lili_Kilo
Lili_KiloLv13Lili_Kilo

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon