Juarez_Culau
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you should try grammarly app it's helps
the story seems promising but the grammar is so hard to swallow I think I have to drop the novel until you get editor but there is so much he would have to rewrite most of your book and i'm pretty sure nobody will be willing to do that. :(
I like it. Its looks promising.
A great start of the story. Love it [img=recommend]
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The Mc got confused with the feeling of death
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The story has great potential and the writing style , describing the events are good . Can see that it's going to be a fast paced storytelling .
Story seems promising but here to tead with the grammar
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