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Comments of chapter undefined of Corridor's of Insanity

Enma_Eden
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Great first chapter! Very detailed too. Although, there are some places where u r meant to put fullstops instead to commas, and places where u should have put commas

Leosbunny_0810
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This chapter is very well written. The narration brought me to the scene and I could see it unfolding before my eyes. I was specifically impressed by the descriptions of the characters, especially of the bad guy. It was very unique. Good job, author! It was a great beginning!

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kkmall656
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Hello : Sorry to bother you ! My name is Peter and I am from another writing platform. I read part of your story - " Corridor's of Insanity " I think is quite interesting for us. We are currently looking those adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). If you are a non exclusive writer in Wattpad, You might consider post your works in other platform to get more royalty. like our platform. So, if you have this thought, Please reply me ! let's discuss and see what we can offer you ! Thanks for your time, Peter