Comments of chapter undefined of Luck is a Charm
Luck is a Charm
Idczhen
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..What did I just readđđđ oh my god, let's just get it out of the way, it's not good. I mean the way you wrote chapter one has already showed me that. it might be your first story and if it is then I'm sorry for being harsh but you just need to work on writing, and the perspective at which you tell it good luck
First chapter already I feel like this novel is not good. Disregarding the bad English, there's plot holes everywhere. Probably because I was reading Rise of the anti god before this, I felt critical about it. First of all, how did the MC know he is in another world when he woke up? Why is he not confused? Why can't he be in another place of the same world? Secondly, the contract. Why does the MC know about the existence of a contract? Didn't he just traveled here? I was hoping for the eagle to say "just what in the world are u talking about? What is a contract? There's no such thing in this world". The fact that the MC just 'knows' these things is really off-putting. It's just wrong and unreal. I know the author want to attribute these with how he read novels but it's just wrong as you will never know. He did not even verify if he really transmigrated. Unless you are telling me that the MC is dropped into that particular novel that he is reading like "Trash of the count family" or "The novel Extra" or "Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint" whereby the MC already verified he is in that novel. Also, I know the author want to attribute the coincidence with his luck power but suddenly meeting the eagle just feels off. It destroy many things if the MC suddenly has a OP companion. There won't be tension and the like. The change in the eagle's attitude is also weird. He is suddenly calling him master -.-ll. There's already so many things to rant on the first chapter and I haven't even mention the English. I can't continue.
