Hey?
I'm participating in Male Lead Demons as well.
But how many words is this prelude ?
You have to write 4000+ words to get this story vetted and and it will appear on your profile.
So far this is really good. The wording and for is great and I really like how the first few paragraphs set the scene. I could actually picture the mountains and Castle in my head from the descriptions. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.