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5/5 🌼 The synopsis is good, as well as the world building 🌺 This is an imaginative, very creative work, and the author has successfully given the readers the actual feeling of being there in the lead character's scenes 👌 Recommended! 🌳

hi author! your book actually deserve more than only five stars! i love the plot of your story and i hope you could publish new chapter but make sure to take your time! thank you for this amazing story! fighting! <3

At first, I thought it was going to be set in a culture similar to Ancient China but I was wrong. Still, it was a refreshing read. You broken down the usual trope and reassembled it to something unique. I can see the potential your book has. It still early to see progress but I'm sure your book will be loved by the readers.

I found a few writing issues, nothing to worry about too much tho. There are some repetitive terms. Try to avoid repeating the same word all over again, it will improve your writing flow. Apart from that, I think everything's fine. Keep up the good work fellow newbie author ;)

the world background is nice and detailed. u can actually see how the author would want his readers to see the world that the characters were living in. the story is fantastic and the development is thrilling. just lessen the number of ellipses per chapter.

Just the first few lines within the first chapter got me thinking this is going to be good. Very clear and well written making it easy to understand. usually i would struggle a lot when many new characters are introduced at once but the author managed to make it easier to digest. Pretty clear the author took the effort to proof read and make it easy to read and visualise the world the author is trying to portray.

A really interesting novel, a little confused about the family tree though?. The story's flow would be easily improved through a couple of easy fixes in punctuation and grammar but these pale in comparison to thought-out world-building :). the only critique would be the overuse of "highness", it gets a little repetitive.

Hi everyone this book is from my friend who happens to be an amazing author. The story is set in a beautiful place with a strong female character. A clear cocktail of thriller, historical and fantasy which any one would love. So go ahead i can guarantee that this book is worth your time.

The book is really good Author has done a brilliant job, go guys read it, it's worth reading. once you read it you'll definitely and surely come for more

Very intriguing story synopsis, a great start and I really like the brilliancy in the aspect of character development. I wish there were more chapters so I could read on and on! More grace to ya author😚🙂❤️

Wow, I can't believe you are a new writer. This is story is great, the writing, story line, characters, everything! It got me hooked from the beginning, the author did a great job!

Wow, everything is A-one in this book, I love to read such types of books.. everything is well written and well presented.. Good luck to author.. keep it up

Very intriguing. Every ending of chapters are so exciting, makes me wanna read more. And also, wow. You got popular in just 8 chapters! Very nice, indeed.

Nice story with an interesting mix of characters. The politics of the high nobles are interesting and intriguing. I am really interested in knowing how things develop between them. Keep up the good work. :D

Hello amazing author, I am impressed by your writing. Though it popped up in my recommendations but I loved it.The way you depicts story is alluring.It is so hooking that I barely controlled myself. Keep updating daily.A most recommended book [img=coins]

Absolutely amazing. You're a really talented writer I should ask for tips. the plot and setting are my type of books. I've been hooked and have fallen in love ever since. it's really amazing.

Hi Author-nim! I'm pretty sure i made a review for this before. I don't know what happened. But anyway, the story is really nice. It's very well written and the world building is so good. Please update regularly ! Will be waiting

Woah!!! You're work is amazing! A hint of advice, you should shorten your synopsis since some readers usually don't read long synopsis. Make it mysterious at the same time contains the plot of your whole story and also make it eye-catching. Anyways, goodluck to your journey fellow writer!!?

The story and plot is interesting. It's so intriguing and make me want to know more and more. I'm a little bit confused about the family tree of Insha's family and relations but I think I will know more after reading more chapters. Good job 💕

The synopsis is very well written and interesting. Since reading the synopsis at the beginning, I've been curious. I've read a few chapters and apparently it's very interesting. The character development is quite good as is the story line. Overall impressive! One of the most recommended books! Keep it up!