Comments of chapter undefined of Percy Jackson: The God of Magic

Response: well mam your positively sparkling Outcome: I used to be an adventurer like you till I took an arrow to the knee

author please stop use * happy* *sad* ... its just annoying just sayin not my story but as a reader it just look wack

Can you please stop with the backwards shit it just takes me hours to translate, or at least put the translation afterward like this ( ) please spare me this mercy O great Cornbringer.

Yeah idk this might be your worst fanfic :/ the astericks *worried* is annoying and unnecessary and the fact that this mc is an actual idiot :/

”teg em eht kcuf yawa„

Im so happy and depressed i have to wait unul tomorrow for thebnext chapter

*worried*this novel is hard to read as there are a ** that describe emotion

How old is he at the end of chapter 7 i cant figure that out.

So now will he stay with Sally then?

new reader here. will there still present, those silly expression written in sally's speech in later chapters? i feel bad reading those tbh, can't wait to just skip it all and then i'll be damned to miss all content too. its quite irritable man, cant enjoy reading this story. can you please write normally?

Don’t they need his stench?

I should really stop even trying to read Cornbringer’s works. He’s too stupid to be a decent author.

This is amazing so far keep this up and this will be my new favorite Fanfiction/Novel

I mean he could always jump out of a window XD.

He just got royally screwed

Author should tone down on the *Emotion* thingy

Book and author writing seems reallY weird. *disgusted* Doesnt really explains things. dropping book

Please keep this up i am so excited to see what happens and where this goes.

Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author 😜 A Fantastic Chapter As Always 😉

please release the next chapter i cant afford patreon