Comments of chapter undefined of Percy Jackson: The God of Magic

1: your mc has no name. 2: he lives in a f*****g sewer. 3: No power or gift from god. 4: He’s a retard. 5: He acts like a 5 year old!!! 6: Any kid his age would of started training their body. 7: His personality is immature and irritating.

I'm loving this fanfic by the the way,keep up the good work,but chaps are too short.

Stock up some chaps for a mass release, that should get you up the charts

The humour is getting thrown about way too much, like tone it down a tad and not a joke every other line... I mean an interesting story other than that. Don't get how he will be a god of magic if he is a demi-god thou...

His jokes are as bad as his personality.

sigh Artemis is right, there's nothing that can help...

what is the update rate for this fic? right now it seams like a chapter a day situation

He should still learn and master the bow and arrow cause he could use it with magic.

Have him meet with the daughter of Zeus and Annabeth and luke

Os deuses gregos são extremamente arrogantes, se o grande autor puder dar uma surra em só todos eles e humilhar de brinde eu seria muito grato, e foda-se o romance com personagens fracos arrume alguma deusa ou titan pro MC se relacionar.

I’m so very tempted to go to your pattern ngl

why can't I force my power stones down the authors throat 😫

thx for the chap

camp half-blood has no place for a non Olympian demigod as the unwanted are put into hermes cabin

I am gonna drop mc is not a god i wanted i god fic i dont care if he becomes on later cus i dont care cus i just wanted a fic with a god and this is not that so i am gonna look for anohter one that dosent have all of olympus as mc harem

It seems like he isn't at the same period as Percy (at least I hope so he has a head start). Probably it is the very early years when Zeus prohibited the Gods from having children. And now that Leto may know the monstrosity of a demigod he will become she's trying to find him? Or is it Zeus manipulating her in doing so?

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Demi god children ugh nah im out

is anyone else thinking that this fool is curse??